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劉曉燕考研英語滿分大作文模板

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大作文:

(1)正面(正確、積極的):01、02、03、08、10

反面(不正確的做法、消極):04、05、06、07、09、11

(2)一幅圖還是兩幅圖(04、06)

(3)作文有無規定題目(僅02)

(4)1st:描述圖畫,2nd:解釋圖畫要表達的含義,3rd:嚴重性及采取的舉措。

例如:2011環境污染;2010:一個火鍋——多種文化

*2012重點預測正面

What the image is trying to express is symbolic and philosophic ! Featured in the above illustration are large numbers of people who , sitting in front of computer , are placed in separate rooms . However ridiculous and humorous it may seem at first glimpse, this cartoon does carry rather significant implications .

 

Evidently, the  cartoonist aims to enlighten us that we should keep a balance between interenet communication and face-to-face .A great deal of attention is being paid today to internet .  Indeed , it has long been know that using the internet in a proper way should be great emphasized ,if we want to construct a harmonious word . to our disappointment , however ,with an ever-developing of science and technology ,people in mounting numbers tend to neglect the seriousness of this problem . hence people’s emotional distance in becoming larger and larger .   

 

keeping a balance between internet communication and face-to-face , to my mind , is not simply good for individuals , but also beneficial to the whole society . Hence a widespread education campaign should be launched so as to enhance people’s awareness of the importance of using internet in a proper way .Only by concerted efforts , can we embrace a happy , healthy and harmonious world , as we all wish , in the long run !

 

 

一種事物或現象(正面意義傾向)(第一段黃色為:is a hot pot,which is a symbol of the world.二三段的中心詞換為:cultural communication)

 

第一段:套話+圖片描述+套話

What the drawing is trying to express is symbolic and philosophic ! (并列押韻,可以說是有用的廢話)Featured in the above image are two men who , each of them having only one leg , are running forward together. (妙在featured和who,插入的獨立主格結構。這句話是得分重點,需要自己組織一個簡單的切題的句子。)However ridiculous and humorous(押韻) it may seem at first glimpse ,this cartoon does carry rather significant implications . (可以認為是有用的廢話.)

 

第二段:主題句+深入闡述+分條闡述+分條闡述

1、Evidently , the  purpose  of  the illustration is to mirror the fact that teamwork (中心詞)is essential to achieving success .(第一句,這是揭示主題的句子,大家的句型百變不離其宗。也是得分重點.)2、Indeed, a great deal of attention is being paid today to (這個句型是某年閱讀理解的第一句)cooperation , which has profound implications for both individual and whole society .(第二句,這是一個長句子,同時也是一個概括句,改卷老師看到你思路清晰。) 3、First and foremost ,in this world of change and complexity, the need for teamwork is of the greatest importance , if one want to realize dreams . (第三句,分述)4、In addition , our country as a whole also could not afford to part with(這個句型是我從某年閱讀理解里借用過來的) teamwork spirit,if we are ever (這個單詞可以不要,不過我看到真題里有這個用法,單詞簡單,但是用法深奧,應該是比較地道的英語。我想改卷老師一定很喜歡。)going to move forward in terms of politics , economy , culture and society .(第四句,分述)

 

第三段:評論

Teamwork spirit ,in my view , is not simply good for individuals , but also beneficial to the whole society .(此句是插入+并列) Hence a widespread education campaign should be launched so as to enhance people’s awareness of the importance of teamwork spirit .(轉折句,是我從徐綻的作文書里總結歸納的。)Only by concerted efforts , can we embrace a happy , healthy and harmonious world , as we all wish , in the long run ! (強調句,高聯的輔導班講過這個句型,強調+并列+插入)

2012考研大作文萬能模板---英語一

第一段 3句話

   ①In the picture above,...... .第一句話(句型要用do+ing\with短語+非限定性定語從句)要將整個漫畫內容描述完整。 要考驗大家的語法功底,首句很重要哦!

②There has been a heated discussion about them in the newspaper.       第二句就是套話,大家也可以自己換其他自己喜歡的句子。

③The picture , at the first glimpse , seem to be simple ,but only a penetrating sight can pierce through its superficial meaning.          同第二句解釋的一樣。

 

第二段 6句話        

    記?。簩懽髦攸c就在此段,因為大多數考研者都會把首尾段寫得出色,但僅此這打動不了閱卷老師,比的就是誰的第二段寫得漂亮,誰就獲得高分的機會大。

  ①The picture tells us that nothing can be compared with the (漫畫主題詞  ) / nothing is more harmful or damaging than the ( 主題詞) .           當時漫畫反映壞/好的方面的主題時,大家相應地進行替換??v觀2001-2011年的漫畫都是如此,大家不用太懷疑。

②In no country other than China ,it has been said ,is this phenomenon more obvious (好的主題用此句). / is the problem of (有關主題詞) more serious 壞的主題用此句).

③What's more,nobody dare fail to / the public fail to attach due attention to the ( 主題詞 ) .    進一步強調主題的好/壞 。

④By doing so ,....... .           給出反映主題的相應的理由,這句話也要各位寫得好,才有打動閱卷的老師給高分的心 ,我只能作為指引。

⑤It will cultivate an optimistic /pessimistic view toward the world and extends people's life expectancy .      給出自己的結論,好寫,套話 。

⑥Were the situation to continue as it is, we would pay the higher price .

               最后一句,虛擬語氣結尾,增添文章句型多變的色彩 。

 

第三段 

    這段可以完全是套話了,大家可以自己選擇喜歡的,把握一點就行:3句話,做到句型復雜多變,反映主題。

  ①In summary,while some people may remain unconvinced by my discussion,but the analysis I have offered so far should at least make them aware of the significance of this phenomenon .

  ②Therefore , the general public is supposed to enhance their awareness that ( cultural exchange 2010年主題詞), to a great degree , plays an importance role in our lives . 

  ③Only in a reasonable ,prosperous and healthy atmosphere ,can we hope to witness the ideal scene in which people will enjoy ( their life ) to the uttermost .

 

 

考研英語作文模板

As is vividly depicted in the picture, ,which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts. The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, , Recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon of 主題 which seems to be disastrous to individual survival and prosperity. This phenomenon of 主題 should be condemned severely or made illegal. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

  中間段落從兩方面論證問題的危害,并舉例論證,預測危害的趨勢

(1) To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several serious effects have been put forward. (2)To begin with,主題 not only results does harm to our physical and mental health but also results in a frustrating and humiliating life. (3)In addition, nothing is more harmful than主題 to contradict with a harmonious society. (4)Last but not the least, no issue is as harmful as 主題 to increase family burdens, which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see. (5)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . (6)According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have ever experienced主題will live a dull life or even feel loss of hope about the future. (7)If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of something.

  最后一段要強調解決問題,談的兩點建議通常是提高人們的意識,加強執法

(1)From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to prevent主題. (2)On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect something. (3)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving somebody out of the evil hands of destruction. (4)However, it is easier said than done. (5)Although the fight against it is long-standing and tremendous one,our efforts will eventually pay off.(6) Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.

 

As is vividly depicted in the picture,(描述圖畫).(2) The most striking feature is(圖畫重點信息). There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

   As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that(重復上面的圖畫信息) profoundly indicates that team work is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. Undoubtedly, it is team work that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. If we don not cooperate sincerely, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated or feel loss of hope about the future. As far as I am concerned, there are several advantages that can be given as below. To begin with, nothing is more beneficial than team work to overcome our defects and improve our efficiency. Secondly, no issue is as good as team work to make our life more colorful and energetic. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. A person who is assigned various jobs along the production lines will make a mess just because no one can be proficient in all the things. Only by cooperating with other people can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society.

From what have been discussed above,it admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to involve yourself into a team work. It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make your team work more efficient. On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other people’s opinions and benefits. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.

 

 As is vividly betrayed in the drawing above (開始描述圖畫), 加上which is both upsetting and most thought-provoding (第一端)描述圖畫

  The aim of the painter of the drawing above can be briefly stated as follow (陳述觀點 ) 可以把這些話加到作文中去 結合作文內容

  perhapers no other things could gain more public attention than...in china for the time being

  .

  It is generally believed that...is a hot topic which is most talked about ,not only by the city residents but also by famers. (任選一個)

  As the society becomes more and more advanced and complicated . ...plays a more and more important role in the life of individual members of the society and in the development of the society itself

  According to recent investigation, there is an increasing numbers of people who share the concern about the issue of ... which is a problem that deserves public,professional and political attention

  Different people have different opinions. Everything has its advantages and disadvantages .It is assciated with your experience ,life style and emotional concern .It is really true for this case

  Advantage and disadvantage are the basic dual concepts of nearly everthing in our life ,It goes without saying that for every advantage,there is always a disadvantage .An advantageous for one group might to prove disdvantages to others .It is really true for this case(作比較)

  句中最好使用一個倒裝句 only + 狀語 + 小倒裝 如

  only when we develop ourselves in a well-rounded way ,can we become prodctive memebers of society (正文)

  counter-measures must be taken immediately so as to ...

  First of all law and regulations must be set up In addition ,a long-term and nation -wide campaign must be launched to popularize...among the general public. Only in this way can we keep...(結尾)

 


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